I CALL IT FATE...
It was Winter , it was a Saturday and it was six in the evening . It was one of those days when I just couldn’t find company for a Saturday evening outing . For me , a Saturday without an outing is like a ‘ Coffee without Sugar ‘ .After all the ideas draining out of my mind , I decided I should be adding sugar(to the coffee) all by myself and hence got up, got dressed and left with the destination undecided .
As I was walking down the lane , I observed that none of my neighbours were around . I had a stupid imagination of them partying in a club . There was a feeling of freshness intilled in me maybe because of the weather which was asusually (in Bangalore) so romantic . The Orange evening sky , a cool breeze which was kind of soothing my senses and the chirping birds which left me feeling peaceful made for a perfect evening . The poet in me was in flowing form. Or maybe it was one of those silly imaginations of mine (untolerable says my sister ) . Anyway , I put a full stop to my ‘in-form’ imaginations and proceeded .
Just as I moved a few paces , I noticed a familiar face looking at me in excitement . I could recognize that he was my primary school classmate . He approached me and said “ Heyy , Arjun right ? ”
“Yeah”
“You remember me ? ”
“Ofcourse Naveen ”
“Heyyy , I’m Sachin ”
(Uff!! Not again ….)
“Oh ya ya , sorry ”
“Haha , You are still the same .!! ”
Strolling along the pavement , we made few more enquiries and exchanged memories of our school days and our teachers . He was so excited about our unexpected rendezvous . We entered a near by park and we did the ‘ Walk the Talk ’ . Though it was long time since we met , we developed very good chemistry between us . He already made it to my ‘Good Friends’ list .
He offered to have some Tea , which he still remembers that it was my favourite drink . While sipping the tea , he invited me for a picnic that he was to go with his friends the next day .It was to some WaterFall . I was busy with a family function the next day , so told him I can’t make it . We left it at that . He had so many things to say about our school . He was up to date with all it’s advancements . After some more talking and walking , we decided to disperse . I told him “Lets catch up on Monday , I’ll take you to my place ” .
He said “ Sure ”.
We shook hands & departed . More than happy with the evening’s proceedings, the freshness still intact on me , the poet in me asleep, I headed home looking forward to meet him on Monday .
And Monday evening I get a call saying “ Sachin is no more . He drowned in a WaterFall near Mysore”.
32 additions to the crap:
Ah, it was destined to meet u tht day to be ur good friend, n he is no more. shall i call it luck tht u were not part of the trip, shall i call it fate if u had been part of the trip may b he would not have drowned. Ifs n buts, but the fact is ur friend is no more.many fruits in a tree few fall of when still it is budding few remain to become ripe in the tree. :)
its like getting & losing at the same time
it was destiny that u met again, and it was destiny that ur encounter did nt last long..
such an abrupt and shocking ending.. god.. i was shaken as i read the last line.. this is fate..
oh my gosh...shocking..n hurting the most..its such an awful fate..poor chap!may be his last wish was to meet a dear friend like you n share his thoughts..this is one good acquaintance that shows life is full of twists n all flavors..i donno what u would conclude..FATE
sachin's soul rest in peace...
expect the unexpected could be the bottom line the bitter interpretation of the other world
wow! that's too bad...
-Niru
Fate it is....
U meet aftr so long.... instantly got along nicely.... he invited u but u dint went.... He drownd and u still posting on this blog....
Fate it is.... for u n for him....
Vry shocking.....
That's so sad :(
life is cruel
and it does not discriminate
Thats really bad...........
Hey Arjun...
Ending is really Shocking...
Couldn't recover...
Anyways thats called fate... U r right...
Keep blogging..
keerthana
Ooh!! an abrupt end :( i dint expect this..i enjoyed your blog til before those last two lines!! My deepest condolence..let his soul rip!!
i was shaken as i read the last line.
Fate it is,for u n for him.
This was thought provoking...
Sounds a bit funny.. but I wonder what will happen on the last (or second last) day of my life...
Sorry for your friend.. such is life..
poor chap..oh man..dats really awful and am really shocked de way it ended..Fate dats the apt word for the situation man..
This is one blog with a kick ass theme \m/
@nacho...
I couldn't find a better word for ur blog buddy.....
Dude, shell shocked when I read the last line. But it happens!!. Sometimes life is a bitch.
And gud post btw!!
tragic..
i wonder if ur feeling that maybe u shudnt have met sachin after so many years, only to lose him in a couple of days..i would have felt that way.
keep posting
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OMG...Thats all I can muster up to say.....
You have a great blog Dude ! and regarding this post i liked the ending of this post !!Thw way u express is nice !!
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Dude... just thank god that u got a chance to meet him before he passed away...n may his soul rest in peace.....
Take care bro
Hey Arjum....
A Humble Suggestion....
I'm guessin u wanted to build up the story so that the reader gets "knocked down" by the ending...But it wud have probably had a lil more effect if u wud have explained the endin or extended it by another 2-3 lines...if things r left this way, it cud come off as crude to some ppl
PS - May God rest ur friend's soul in peace...
goodness! tht was so sudden.. didnt expect the end! m so sorry 4 u'r loss!
solid template ..it dam good and suit to ur matters..keep it up
yea man....strange co-incidence...eh??? All of us call it fate!
God bless! Cheers!
shit,he died :(.
i dont havbe words to describe this post,its just your imaginations and thoughts which creates magic.
that is sad man. i guess u cant help some aspects of life.
Ok i didnt xpect that at all..as i was reading this post ..the one thing that was runnin in my mind was that I love ur blog and the posts...and toward the end wen i read the last line...I was moved to tears...m soorry mate..i ges it is fate after all...
RIP Sachin
And God Bless U Ari
Tee
is this real or fiction?
The end is really unexpected and shocking but in a weird way makes the narration complete. Though if it is a true life story it makes really sad. I dont like sad stories :(
ohh...that was sad... may his soul rest in peace...
it's all fate...and many people have had similar experiences like u...
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